I changed my thesis statement.
Introduction: What is Gaokao?
Why should Chinese students attend Gaokao?
How do Chinese students perform in Gaokao?
Does Gaokao really benefit Chinese students?
What is the influence: Gaokao exerts negative influence on students and even make them diffident.
1. Students who do not perform well in Gaokao exam are worried about their future life.
They may do something unimaginable with unwanted aftermath.
2. It seems that Chinese education system is more likely to test students’ memory and students who perform well in Gaokao are usually lacking of practical skills.
3. Gaokao requires students to study more than three subjects. Students are always under pressure.
Conclusion: Chinese education system should be changed and there are more aspects about students’ development should be focused on.