I changed my thesis statement.
Introduction: What is Gaokao?
Why should Chinese students attend Gaokao?
How do Chinese students perform in Gaokao?
Does Gaokao really benefit Chinese students?
What is the influence: Gaokao exerts negative influence on students and even make them diffident.
Main body:
1. Students who do not perform well in Gaokao exam are worried about their future life.
They may do something unimaginable with unwanted aftermath.
http://hubpages.com/politics/GaoKao-The-Biggest-Problem-with-the-Current-Chinese-Education-System
http://uschina.usc.edu/w_usct/showarticle.aspx?articleID=17411&AspxAutoDetectCookieSupport=1
2. It seems that Chinese education system is more likely to test students’ memory and students who perform well in Gaokao are usually lacking of practical skills.
http://uschina.usc.edu/w_usct/showarticle.aspx?articleID=17411&AspxAutoDetectCookieSupport=1
3. Gaokao requires students to study more than three subjects. Students are always under pressure.
http://theconversation.com/why-reforms-to-chinas-college-entrance-exam-are-so-revolutionary-36048
Conclusion: Chinese education system should be changed and there are more aspects about students’ development should be focused on.